My idea for a film opening

The film opens with a young female running through a woods, listening to music on an ipod. There will then be a black screen which then the credits will then start to run. It will then retune to a the runner, with credit still going but looking like they are following her.She then stops to stretch, she then jumps because she thinks she saw a dark shadow of someone. this will be done using a range of different camera shots.
There is then a close up of they young female turning her ipod off, but is pretending to still be listening to it. She looks around to she if she can see any thing but nothing. she beings to run slowly. she will then her branches braking behind her and starts to run faster and faster. The runner will then come to an obstetrical (probably a fallen log) she try's  to climb it but falls and blacks out, there is then another black screen.
when she wakes, we will be trying to create the affect of her being dizzy by  having her rotate and the camera rotating in the other direction.
The audiences will then she her tidied and gagged to a chair in a dark room with a single spot light on her with nothing but a table in front of her. She looks up and can see someone but they are far away. The killers hand will come into shot and there will then be a close up of a knife stabbing into a table.
Then finale another black screen.